Buddy's Marketing Forum

jada2002 · Tue Mar 06, 2007 3:52 pm Please Please

Hi everyone,
I would like some feed back please.
Please check out my site and tell me
honestly what's wrong with it,I dont get
the kind of customers that I would like.
So let me have it,tell me what you all
think..Could it be the product,or maybe
it's the message...

I will appreciate anything you say,good
or bad.
Thanks. :(

Buddy · Thu Mar 08, 2007 8:49 pm

Which site? Buddy

Buddy · Fri Mar 09, 2007 4:38 am

Okay I hit all 3 links in your signature(the limit is three total lines in your signature, please edit).
The first link went no where and the next two go to the same page-so you could easily remove one of them. To me the page was a typical ad page with as much information as possible on the first page. So, maybe some people find it to overwhelming. Buddy

dfullmer · Wed May 23, 2007 5:53 pm

I clicked on your vitamin link, The yahoo link took me to my yahoo acount.

You have a lot of stuff on the first page of you site and I kind of agree with Buddy. It's a little overwhelming. Also, I tried to register my reactions to the page and here is my feelings. And as you asked, I will try to be constructive.

The vitamins packaging says, "The Greatest" and "The Perfect Pill". Now I ask you, "Why should I believe you that these are the greatest and perfect?"

There is a tendency for all of us to want to give the most information we can in the first impression we make with our prospects, but think about it a little.

Wouldn't it be better to pique my interest a little and give me enough to make me want to "turn the page" and go to the rest of your site?

How about something like this, "Did you know that Acerola Cherry produces X times as much vitamin C as Rose Hips? (I don't know if this is true or not, but you see my point).

Or, did you know that the protective coating on most vitamins bought in local stores won't dissolve and go right through your body? (Actually some vitamins bought and used totally end up in the sewer without ever dissolving)

What I am saying is that it struck me that most of what I saw on your page was booorinnng. Somehow, you need to make it exciting to look at and create a desire to "turn the page".

Hope this helps a little and believe me I don't mean to belittle your site. I commend you for asking and being willing to put up with the "bashing". Althogh I don't mean to bash in any way. See if you can create some excitement and I think you will do well.

Dave

mizrae · Fri May 25, 2007 5:03 pm your site for wellness

At first glance, this looks like a generic affiliate site. I think you would be better off linking to the section "Health Facts". Plus as a consumer, I'd want to know who makes these products, how long they've been on the market, the active ingredients, and your personal endorsement. what have they done for you since taking them? what have you noticed about your health that might have improved? this is probably where a blog or intro website would come in handy leading to the order page. I have to agree with Dave and Buddy that this site as it stands is way too overwhelming and yet it doesn't have some of the most important information I'd like to know.